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Kay Val

Posted by: naghinuktok | October 14, 2008 |

They brought you flowers Val

The blooms weren’t what you had specified but

There they were: flowers and

People whose lives you touched and

Who, certainly, touched enlivened enhanced yours

The woman beside me nodded through

Her tears when I asked her if she

Knew you and I envied her for having had

The chance to be with you in your new milieu

Your chosen paths and spaces and I

Wondered had you also talked to her?

 

I was not able  to share with them my thoughts

And stories about you it was

Another’s words whom I read that night

But I know you knew what I wanted to

Say: that I haven’t strayed too

Far from your admonitions that night

We trudged through the streets of Ilustre

To seek one’s happiness to serve people well

To aspire for wisdom courage and

Resilience and to not to be too afraid or

Angry to forget joyfulness for it isn’t just

All about deprivation and struggle but also

And perhaps more so about hopes and dreams 

And loves desires and having something

Someone to look forward to whether it is humba or

A particular someone a group a unit a community

 

And Val they came and they brought you flowers

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beautiful, romantic, and sad….sigh….i wish i had the right superlatives to describe what i feel about your writing, (yes i’ve been stalking for a while but never got round to leaving any comments…), but really mags, it can’t get any better and truer than this, like edna sv millay meets cummings sentiment kind-of. forgive my unforgivable metaphor, i’ve been away too long from all the poetry stuff, but you see, it still hits me… so i guess you get my drift. in other words, you just wow me like you’ve always had. keep writing, mags!

and right about here shaz is where a lot of feet shuffling happens :) salamat, i guess i owe your kind views to your gentle and positive nature rather than to any claims i may have to writing. sabi nga ni abner luzon, my writing is pained :P

hehe, took a second look at my reply above, shaz… i can hear my other friends saying “ding-ding-ding-ding! fishing!” :P

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